Wednesday, July 2, 2008

I am Joshua

I am nice and mean
I wonder what i will become in life
I hear music
I see everything
I want a career
I am nice and mean

I pretend not to care
I feel nothing
I touch paper
I worry too much
I cry never
I am nice and mean

I understand i need school to become successful
I say i will go to college
I dream about being unbreakable
I try to come to school
I have to finish school
I am nice and mean.

4 comments:

Wes You Rock!!!!! said...

I think your poem was not well put, it seemed rushed and i see pizza grease on it. I think next time you should take you time and use your mind to express yourself not your hands. Don't take this as an insult, but constructive criticism.

melinda said...

eww ..lol..od i don't like his comment,...lol..anyways i thought it was cool..i don't believe that u don't cry ever

kimberly said...

I think your poem descirbes your life and i think it's how you really feel.
If you just work hard you can succeed.

Good luck*

Garnett said...

so do you see yourself as a record producer ? if so thats a great career.